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Thursday, 11 June 2015
Spring Joys
All over, joys spring
Everyone grips sun
Love of warmth spreads
Blooms and bees dream together
Honey-talk Begins
Flowers buzzing
Life burgeoning
Zephyr sings softly
Gaily clad Nature
Waits
Nature gaily clad
Softly sings zephyr
Burgeoning life
Buzzing flowers
Begin honey-talk
Together dream bees and blooms
Spread warmth of love
Sun grips everyone
Spring joys all over
Posted for Mary’s prompt @ MTB dVerse
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You wrote a double-mirror poem; this is even harder than what the rest of us did. I can feel the joy and energy in you warm lines, Sumana!
ReplyDeleteWhew, Sumana, I am thoroughly impressed with this. You have me smiling here. I didn't even think of doing such a complex poem as this. Breathtaking really. What more can I say!!
ReplyDeleteAnd yes, spring joys all over!
Very nice Sumana . I am left with a nice warm feeling. It was in the 90s here today. No relief from the heat. Sokid work on the form.
ReplyDeleteSolid.
DeleteFingers too fast
Oh, beautifully done, with a true mirroring in the reversed phrases. And a lovely poem resulting, I particularly liked the dreaming bees and blooms, both times around!
ReplyDeleteThis is what a perfect mirror palindrome looks like, a twist in the lines, yet the meaning is complete ~ I can visualize the joyful spring ~
ReplyDeleteKudos for reaching way out there to write the double-mirror lines, requiring more thought & blue penciling. You get a blue ribbon for perfection, for riding the wild steed prompt into calmness.
ReplyDeleteMore difficult and more restrictive with a word than a sentence palindrome. You've done it very well Sumana!
ReplyDeleteHank
Love the blooms and buzzing of nature and the twice mirrored effect...nice one, Sumana.
ReplyDeleteI totally agree with everyone else...this is just perfection in how you reversed line and words. Bees and blooms buzzing...life joyful...This poem is A+++++++++++++++
ReplyDeleteso nice ..................spring in its glory
ReplyDeleteA wonderful feeling to be among the blooms and buzz of bees. Yes this is exactly how it feels.
ReplyDeleteWOW, you really outdid me on this--BRAVO!!!!
ReplyDeleteExcellent work,above and beyond the call of prompt!
ReplyDeleteA whimsical, wonderful palindrome, Sumana! I'm impressed how you smoothly reversed the words as well as the lines of verse!
ReplyDeleteHow effective! I felt each image the first time, and the second time took the waiting away. I entered spring. Wow.
ReplyDeleteYou, as have a few others, took it all the way. And both of us have enjoyed those bee whisperings. The gift of moderate temperatures which are lacking in so many parts of the planet. We are headed into our 4th year of drought while others are experiencing floods.
ReplyDelete(:..Voices of Spring ring truth
ReplyDeletein blooms buzzing flowering
Humming Bees
Singing..
Humans Whistling
song of Nature IN
HOPE
IN Nature of song
Whistling Humans
Singing
Bees Humming..
flowering buzzing blooms in
truth ring Spring of Voices..:)
Wow! You have managed to turn things around, as well as mirror them. This is lovely.
ReplyDeleteSuch a joyous feeling to this poem :D
ReplyDeleteBeautifully captured!
You raised the bar with this one! Something to admire and be inspired by for palindrome poetry. I love "buzzing flowers"!
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