The Himalayan Monal: Source
I’ll dust the cloud from window pane
To see the sun leap up on mountaintop
I’ll drown myself in birdsong
Then walk like a Monal*
Radiating dazzling colors of joy
My Himalayan dream
Is a skein of wild geese on migration
I’ll catch those beads of frost on my palm
When the lofty pines will sigh
I’ll treasure the touch
Of mossy oaks and, stately deodars**
And the smooth silvery bark of the tall firs
My Himalayan dream
Is the rare blue poppy pushing out of the
thawing soil
I’ll keep the lone moon cascading on the snow
caps
In my swaying rib cage
I’ll free my mind of the thoughts that walk snow-leopard
like
In fear of the poachers coveting its smoky
gray skin
I’ll bring with me the rock solid spirit of ibex
My Himalayan dream
Is a dense reddish brown woolly coated Tahr***to
keep all warm
*Monal is a Himalayan bird with nine iridescent
colors
**Deodar is a species of cedar in western
Himalayas
***Tahr is a relative of the wild goat
This poem is inspired by Words From Cold Mountain by Han-Shan
Posted for Susan’s Midweek Motif ~ Mountain @ Poets United
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any picture comes to my mind, i try to give it a body of words, love to sit on other blooms, for honey, color, fragrance........
Wednesday, 20 January 2016
The Himalayan Dream
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I’ll drown myself in birdsong
ReplyDeleteThen walk like a Monal*
Radiating dazzling colors of joy
My Himalayan dream
This is absolutely profound!! :D
Sumana, the imagery in your poem is spectacular....I so love the Himalayan dream being described as "a skein of wild geese on migration", and that "blue poppy pushing out of thawing soil"......gorgeous work, my friend.
ReplyDeleteI could feel every word! Brilliant poem.
ReplyDeleteSuch beautiful imagery. Loved reading the poem :)
ReplyDeleteWOW! What a dream, realized in the flora, fauna and rib cage of the heart! O to be this mindful and free!
ReplyDelete"I’ll free my mind of the thoughts that walk snow-leopard like
In fear of the poachers coveting its smoky gray skin . . ."
Such wild beauty, and all imaginable once we wipe off the fogged glass in front of us!
Really you have made me see your Himalayan dream with your words! Striking images. Such beauty.
ReplyDeleteHow easy it is for the reader to walk with you and picture your words. Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteSuch beauty...
ReplyDeleteHey Sumana, thanks for the new terms. I love the monal and its beauty. How pretty. gives me pretty thoughts, hehhe. Great write!
ReplyDeleteread with joy, this beautiful painting on your poetry easel
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Just so amazing and I am in love with mountains.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant!
ReplyDeleteI loved the opening lines:
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I’ll dust the cloud from window pane
To see the sun leap up on mountaintop
I’ll drown myself in birdsong
Then walk like a Monal*"
Simply awesome! :)
Oh yes! Someday I hope to see the monal in the wild.. I've only seen her in captivity and that is sad as much as it was utterly captivating...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful imagery !
ReplyDeleteOh, you created some dreamy visuals, sumana!! And I love those gorgeous sprinkles of golden dust in the sky...love this piece.
ReplyDeleteI love the opening image...and every one that followed! The wonderful can be wondrous even looking out at it - if we choose to see..and feel that wonder
ReplyDeleteYou have painted such a pretty picture with your words!
ReplyDeleteI didnt know about this bird... Thanks for sharing :)
ReplyDeleteWell written :)
The Himalayas are so imposing that it would necessarily bring many to have dreams of its greatness!
ReplyDeleteHank
So much beauty (and of course nature) in this lovely dream. Your poem brings the reader into the dream
ReplyDeleteFeels mystical to me
ReplyDeleteOur earth is so beautiful, Sumana, and the Himalayas are a magical spot on our earth. A lovely write.
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