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Saturday, 16 January 2016
Silence
Dawn’s soft pink downs,
A teary twilight,
Clapping monsoon clouds
In appreciation of peacock dance
The lofty Himalayas,
Looking over the Ganga,
Grains of planets and stars
Strewn across the universe
Singing the song of existence
Rob me of my desire,
Tears of joy trickle down the cheeks
All words melt into non-existence
I am silent.
Posted for Sanna’s prompt ~ Silence @ Prompt Nights – On Popular Demand [1]
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This literally left me speechless!! Thank you so much Sumana for this gem of a poem :D Beautifully penned!
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Sanaa
Great use of words. This poem transported me to a different place. Nature often enchants us and make us speechless. A great read, Sumana Ma'am :)
ReplyDeleteGrains of planets and stars
ReplyDeleteRob me of my desire,
All words melt into non-existence
I am silent.
Reading this was so peaceful...
What a wonderful moment expressed here - almost like an answered prayer
ReplyDeleteAll words melt into non-existence
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Silence may leave one vulnerable. Perhaps to state one's case to maintain relevance
Hank
"All words melt into non-existence"- Mother Nature has the power to make us speechless...she robs us of all the words, mundane desires...such is the beauty, sublime...
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem..I'm speechless, too... :-)
Grains of planets and stars
ReplyDeleteStrewn across the universe
Singing the song of existence......... is gorgeous!
Something to be said for forgetfulness...there are always surprises. Sorry for the comment about my porch post...you commented Fiery Sadness...thank you...but when I got here, I had forgotten.
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Thank you and have a blessed week.
That is some kind of sweet robbery!
ReplyDeleteSuch nature can definitely take one's breath away! :) Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThe ever so beautiful nature :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful...!!
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