Saturday, 16 January 2016

Silence


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Dawn’s soft pink downs,

A teary twilight,

Clapping monsoon clouds

In appreciation of peacock dance

The lofty Himalayas,

Looking over the Ganga,

Grains of planets and stars

Strewn across the universe

Singing the song of existence

Rob me of my desire,

Tears of joy trickle down the cheeks

All words melt into non-existence

I am silent.

 


Posted for Sanna’s prompt ~ Silence @ Prompt Nights – On Popular Demand [1]

13 comments:

  1. This literally left me speechless!! Thank you so much Sumana for this gem of a poem :D Beautifully penned!


    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  2. Great use of words. This poem transported me to a different place. Nature often enchants us and make us speechless. A great read, Sumana Ma'am :)

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  3. Grains of planets and stars
    Rob me of my desire,
    All words melt into non-existence
    I am silent.

    Reading this was so peaceful...

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  4. What a wonderful moment expressed here - almost like an answered prayer

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  5. All words melt into non-existence
    I am silent

    Silence may leave one vulnerable. Perhaps to state one's case to maintain relevance

    Hank

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  6. "All words melt into non-existence"- Mother Nature has the power to make us speechless...she robs us of all the words, mundane desires...such is the beauty, sublime...

    Wonderful poem..I'm speechless, too... :-)

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  7. Grains of planets and stars
    Strewn across the universe
    Singing the song of existence......... is gorgeous!

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  8. Something to be said for forgetfulness...there are always surprises. Sorry for the comment about my porch post...you commented Fiery Sadness...thank you...but when I got here, I had forgotten.

    I will not be offended if you alter or delete my comment.

    Thank you and have a blessed week.

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  9. That is some kind of sweet robbery!

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  10. Such nature can definitely take one's breath away! :) Beautiful.

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