Wednesday, 30 October 2013


HAPPY HALLOWEEN

That slender figure
With thousands of green eyes glowing
Was beckoning
A winged Babe responded
And began drinking darkness
Until dawn cracked letting out the huge yolk
The tree was happy

Written for Verse First @ Poets United
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9 comments:

  1. NataĊĦek31 October 2013 at 01:38

    the imagery is really good.. what a tree.

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  2. Jae Rose31 October 2013 at 04:35

    drinking darkness..great line!

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  3. revelations31 October 2013 at 07:04

    I also loved that line "drinking darkness..."

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  4. Unknown31 October 2013 at 07:54

    I love your clear and colorful images here. What a great imagination you have

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  5. Unknown31 October 2013 at 07:59

    WOW, loved the imagery and picture your words painted. Brilliant!

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  6. Brian Miller31 October 2013 at 08:36

    ha. nice reveal...and love the yolk of sun!

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  7. Panchali31 October 2013 at 15:14

    Lovely...thank god for that yolk of the sun! Awesome imagery, Sumona. :)

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  8. Sherry Blue Sky31 October 2013 at 17:09

    I really like "dawn crack(ing) the yolk" of the sun and "drinking darkness".

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  9. Unknown1 November 2013 at 09:05

    Never heard the sun described this way. Well done.

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