Sunday, 11 May 2014

A SKY

image by Martin Stranka

I am your dream sky
Embracing your
Passions that burn
And dispel darkness
I am with you forever
Settle slowly
Glass may be shattered
Names may be rubbed out
All that is false and clumsy
May always meet with an axe
To be weeded out
Listen to my promise to you
When there is a fall
The hard land will vanish
Only to become petals
To have you ensconced
With soft fragrance

 Posted for Mag 219 @ Magpie Tales

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23 comments:

  1. That sounds like a wonderful dream sky..always better to land on petals than concrete..

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  2. Ah! what a carefree heart is this........that trusts its lover!! lovely!!

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  3. Those petals will do for me any day...:-)

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  4. I esp. love:
    Embracing your
    Passions that burn
    And dispel darkness

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  5. Becoming petals... Lovely.

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  6. hey i would be happy that all that was fals and clumsy met the axe...leaving only what is true...

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  7. the feeling of falling on soft pedals ensconced in sweet fragrance is a lovely thought

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  8. Love the flow and the 'falling' in this. So beautiful.

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  9. I love the dream sky and the falling on soft petals....very cool!

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  10. Hardships -- how well to be able to meet that fragrance in the end... lovely..

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  11. Lovely. Well-penned. :-)
    -HA

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  12. I love the idea of the hard land vanishing when we fall.

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  13. " When there is a fall The hard land will vanish Only to become petals" - beautiful!

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  14. Oh, to know a hard landing will become petals....such hope. Beautiful

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  15. Love and reassurance had never read so beautifully. Wow. Such a fierce love...

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  16. Petals with fragrance, soft landing in all its aromatic goodness, how nice! Good one Sumana!

    Hank

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  17. dreaming, floating, petals.... beautiful.

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  18. Truth will triumph..truth is beauty , beauty is truth.. and all lie will die Ya beautiful words like petals to awaken the spirit!! smiles:))

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  19. I love when every thing falls in to place like this poem did. All the prompts included. Well written and beautiful.

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  20. Your last lines are exquisite. :-)

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