Sunday, 11 May 2014

A SKY

image by Martin Stranka

I am your dream sky
Embracing your
Passions that burn
And dispel darkness
I am with you forever
Settle slowly
Glass may be shattered
Names may be rubbed out
All that is false and clumsy
May always meet with an axe
To be weeded out
Listen to my promise to you
When there is a fall
The hard land will vanish
Only to become petals
To have you ensconced
With soft fragrance

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22 comments:

  1. Jae Rose12 May 2014 at 01:59

    That sounds like a wonderful dream sky..always better to land on petals than concrete..

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  2. Vandana Sharma12 May 2014 at 02:16

    Ah! what a carefree heart is this........that trusts its lover!! lovely!!

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  3. Jinksy12 May 2014 at 02:31

    Those petals will do for me any day...:-)

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  4. Anonymous12 May 2014 at 03:33

    I esp. love:
    Embracing your
    Passions that burn
    And dispel darkness

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  5. Anonymous12 May 2014 at 04:16

    Becoming petals... Lovely.

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  6. Brian Miller12 May 2014 at 05:16

    hey i would be happy that all that was fals and clumsy met the axe...leaving only what is true...

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  7. Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene)12 May 2014 at 05:40

    the feeling of falling on soft pedals ensconced in sweet fragrance is a lovely thought

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  8. Anonymous12 May 2014 at 07:01

    Beautiful!

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  9. Kathryn Dyche12 May 2014 at 07:44

    Love the flow and the 'falling' in this. So beautiful.

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  10. Sherry Blue Sky12 May 2014 at 10:09

    I love the dream sky and the falling on soft petals....very cool!

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  11. brudberg12 May 2014 at 10:47

    Hardships -- how well to be able to meet that fragrance in the end... lovely..

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  12. Anonymous12 May 2014 at 14:16

    Lovely. Well-penned. :-)
    -HA

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  13. Other Mary12 May 2014 at 15:27

    I love the idea of the hard land vanishing when we fall.

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  14. Wendy Bourke12 May 2014 at 20:24

    " When there is a fall The hard land will vanish Only to become petals" - beautiful!

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  15. Susie Clevenger12 May 2014 at 20:43

    Oh, to know a hard landing will become petals....such hope. Beautiful

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  16. Magaly Guerrero12 May 2014 at 22:43

    Love and reassurance had never read so beautifully. Wow. Such a fierce love...

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  17. kaykuala13 May 2014 at 00:07

    Petals with fragrance, soft landing in all its aromatic goodness, how nice! Good one Sumana!

    Hank

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  18. rel13 May 2014 at 01:23

    dreaming, floating, petals.... beautiful.

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  19. adhi das13 May 2014 at 02:06

    Truth will triumph..truth is beauty , beauty is truth.. and all lie will die Ya beautiful words like petals to awaken the spirit!! smiles:))

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  20. Gail13 May 2014 at 20:52

    I love when every thing falls in to place like this poem did. All the prompts included. Well written and beautiful.

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  21. Tess Kincaid14 May 2014 at 11:47

    Well done...

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  22. Anonymous16 May 2014 at 15:18

    Your last lines are exquisite. :-)

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