THUS SPAKE LOTUS
courtesy : google image
Let my soul
be enraptured
By the
soothing hue
Of petals
opening out
Let the bee
and butterfly alight
My language
is nectar
I desire to
proliferate
I long to
embrace every water-hole
To whisper,
talk, and sing
Of unity in
diversity
Before I
fade and wither
Let the lotus bloom
Let the fragrance spread
lovely and refreshing!
ReplyDeletehmmm...i like a language as sweet and soothing as nectar... and good on spreading that fragrance as long as there's time....
ReplyDeleteThis is so lovely...
ReplyDeleteSo good to to capture that smell... to live in the fragrance.. I just read Tagore's Lotus, and it is impossible for me not to reflect on this.. it seems almost a comment on his (at least the last two lines)
ReplyDeleteA story of unending beauty.................
ReplyDeleteMy language is nectar. So sweet! and spread your language.
ReplyDeletenice rapid piece
ReplyDeleteI love this line too - My language is nectar. ~ let the fragrance of spring spread ~
ReplyDeletemmm i can inhale and smell that smell...i like your touch to the senses..i like the language being nectar as well...
ReplyDeleteOoo...this subject is perfect...I love that you brought the many facets of meaning to the lotus and addressed them directly but didn't specifically or generically name the common traits given to the lotus. Nice approach beautiful writing..."my language is nectar" I love that!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!!! *sigh* So beautiful!
ReplyDeleteSuch a celebration of spring and growth; love it!
ReplyDeleteAn ideal subject for this time of year.
ReplyDeleteah lorya flowers - the lotus eaters, their language is nectar too,
ReplyDeletelanguid. Lotus seeds stay viable for a century, so they are bound to proliferate.
Nice.
Very sweet (अत्युत्तम)
ReplyDeleteZQ
Yes, let it! I love this poem. I will keep it in my file of poems i don't want to live without!
ReplyDeleteLike raindrops on ferns. Beautiful !
ReplyDeleteThus spake Cressida
May all our blossoms open....may the fragrance spread. This is a very beautiful poem - Zen-like!
ReplyDeletelovely!
ReplyDeletereminds me of Emoto's quote :"you will discover yourself, like a lotus flower in full bloom, even in a muddy pond, beautiful and strong.” :)
This is beautiful. Unfolding as gently as a blossom.
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ReplyDeleteI like the way the colour and shape compliments the subject of your poem.
ReplyDeletethis is beautiful style and message; have a nice Sunday
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much love...
Language is nectar, I like that sweet words.
ReplyDeleteI have no idea why I confused your name with Susan's, earlier, but I apologize.
ReplyDeleteThe part about this poem making me feel good was absolutely true, however. I especially like "To whisper, talk, and sing
Of unity in diversity
Before I fade and wither"
—K
So completely romantic and inspiring. Lovely work, Sumana.
ReplyDelete"My language is nectar"
ReplyDeleteThis is a stunning (not to mention sweet) line!
Beautiful "my language is nectar" May each of us fill the air with words that bring beauty and peac
ReplyDeleteSimply a lovely piece - everything that a beautiful poem should be!
ReplyDeleteMmmm so very lovely!
ReplyDeletea fine finish ~
ReplyDeleteThis is an amazing poem! Lovely word flow. Your words are indeed nectar :)
ReplyDeleteA beautiful sensuous meditation. Thank you,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
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