Sunday, 4 May 2014



   

RING

                                         courtesy : google image

 

The black rings on face

Hiding those long, deep black eyes

What are you up to?



Posted for Haiku Horizons prompt Ring                                    

   
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15 comments:

  1. magiceye4 May 2014 at 23:14

    And the mystery deepens...

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  2. Locomente4 May 2014 at 23:40

    Ha ha...
    This is really good!

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  3. Unknown5 May 2014 at 00:22

    nice one... :)

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  4. kalpana solsi5 May 2014 at 01:16

    A very different take on the prompt , Sumana. Hiding behind the rings of curls make it more mysterious.

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  5. Ramesh Sood5 May 2014 at 04:20

    Interesting...well done..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/05/a-distant-home-haiku.html

    RS

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  6. rallentanda5 May 2014 at 04:26

    Ha...no good!

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  7. Anonymous5 May 2014 at 05:47

    Powerful in so few words

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  8. Outlawyer5 May 2014 at 07:06

    Ha!

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  9. Unknown5 May 2014 at 20:13

    Arousing so many questions. Nice one.

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  10. rabbi neil fleischmann6 May 2014 at 17:21

    Nice. Sounds like the start of a story...

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  11. Unknown7 May 2014 at 06:11

    Mysterious haiku...nice job!

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  12. Reshma7 May 2014 at 08:31

    curly hair always adds a touch of mischief and mystery to the persona. Loved this unique take on the prompt Sumana :)

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  13. Judith Westerfield8 May 2014 at 16:45

    love your original take on the prompt!

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  14. Anonymous9 May 2014 at 10:10

    woven with mystery , wonderful !

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  15. Anonymous11 May 2014 at 12:12

    Mmmm! Behind those eyes, only he knows!! I like this.

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