Sunday 4 May 2014



   

RING

                                         courtesy : google image

 

The black rings on face

Hiding those long, deep black eyes

What are you up to?



Posted for Haiku Horizons prompt Ring                                    

   

15 comments:

  1. And the mystery deepens...

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  2. Ha ha...
    This is really good!

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  3. A very different take on the prompt , Sumana. Hiding behind the rings of curls make it more mysterious.

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  4. Interesting...well done..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/05/a-distant-home-haiku.html

    RS

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  5. Powerful in so few words

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  6. Arousing so many questions. Nice one.

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  7. Nice. Sounds like the start of a story...

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  8. Mysterious haiku...nice job!

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  9. curly hair always adds a touch of mischief and mystery to the persona. Loved this unique take on the prompt Sumana :)

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  10. love your original take on the prompt!

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  11. woven with mystery , wonderful !

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  12. Mmmm! Behind those eyes, only he knows!! I like this.

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