any picture comes to my mind,
i try to give it a body of words,
love to sit on other blooms,
for honey, color, fragrance........
Saffron is such a beautiful color; the imagery of the river is lovely...The black foliages on trees as well... smiles
Tear drop of violet day light..very nice image there sumana...:)
Oh I love teardrop of a violet day mingling with water...very nice indeed.
I like the imagery of saffron waters and violet daylight mingling with the water ~ There's tranquility there ~
The solace of the soft colors contrasts so much to those black trees I think...
What a beautiful flow this poem has, Sumana.
i like how you touch each sense.....the vespers, mixed with the violet daylight in the water....whole lot of imagery to take in with this one....
Ah! Ganga..........................her one touch makes us pious!
i love the peacefulness in this...and oh the ganges being himalayas daughter.... what a wonderful thought and image
Sweet yet profound, & a nice take on the dVerse prompt. It transported me to your word for a time; thanks.
Very lovely imagery...I can see the monk , "sprinkles on his shaven head". Love the flowing Himalayas.......
Quite a beautiful poem you conjured up here...perhaps it was the mood you were in at the time...mystical, mythical, yet, solemn and serene in nature..lovely actually
yes, the river would be the daughter of the mountains - beautiful and pure at the source.
This is beautiful!
what a tranquil, vivid moment. inspiring and beautiful. also enjoy the little tidbit towards the end, i learned something new!
This is a beautifully colourful piece, with a magical quality that I really enjoyed.
this is very visual. :-)
Thank you for stopping by and sharing your valuable thoughts.........