any picture comes to my mind,
i try to give it a body of words,
love to sit on other blooms,
for honey, color, fragrance........
Oh! Calll them out, we deserve it! But so beautifully done.
Wonderful.... the first line unfolds an image before my eyes...
I can see those nails....huge! ~ Great image! x
Down to a t! And yes the nail image very effective and evocative...
Nice work with this tanka. Good images!
Oh those armchair politicians can bring a storm to any table!!
Incredibly vivid, especially the nail image. Great work with the prompt. Loved this.
Nice Sumana. The armchair politicians like creating storms.
first 2 lines are amazing...the tearing of the clouds with those light nails...vivid picture....but spot on...
I like the storm in a teacup - and the armchair politicians. Clever!
I agree with Sherry the last two lines are great.
Sumana,An image of cruel destruction from all angles...Eileen
loved the image you have created here..:)
Beautiful, strong imagery.
aptly captured images with a strong message
Storm in a tea cup risesI really like that line!
Awesome - really interesting and different "take" on armchair politicians.
Thank you for stopping by and sharing your valuable thoughts.........