any picture comes to my mind,
i try to give it a body of words,
love to sit on other blooms,
for honey, color, fragrance........
Health s your depth of field, Isn't it? I love: "Be the ring masterLash your mindTo go throughThe fiery rings of restrainIf a tiger can do that with flamesIs a human a lesser being?"and"Be amazed at the power of wordsBut don’t you ever mingle with themWhy should you?You are not words, are you?"And love everything in between until Tranquility reigns. Thank you!
Sumana - Our health really is ruled by attitude, environment and what we consume. Your words speak so beautifully of the truth of health.
Sumana, I needed your words this morning, especially about "the fiery rings of restraint". LOVE being with the soft sky morning and evening. Such peace evoked in that line. A beautiful write. You understand well-being thoroughly.
This is soooo beautiful....."Select dawn and duskTo be with the soulFeed it with the soft hued sky
Thank YouALOHA from HonoluluComfortSpiral =^..^= . <3 . >< } } (°>
Being ringmaster is fine but you still have those tricky clowns playing tricks on you.
Control - is such a simple word but difficult to implement / follow. I liked how each stanza becomes a source of reminder to the reader..
healt is wealth as the old adage says and really its so true
Yes take control of your health, a great message.
You addressed the body, the mind, and the soul. Excellent. It doesn't do much good to only take care of one or two. Health for all three parts of being human makes for the best life we can have.
Indeed! So beautifully versed!
Well penned, Sumana. I enjoy your poems.
So many interesting thoughts included in the poem. I love lines about 'ring master', thoughts that that we are more than body, mind, words....then you use word 'omnipotent dweller' and I read the meaning and its goes deep.....though I love 'when body shines' being aligned within....
Yes, yes, yes. What a glorious prayer you have written. Amen to it.
Enjoyed this! It brought to mind the old adage: “If you don’t take care of your body, where are you going to live?”
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