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The longest day
Draped in black monsoon sari
Weeps a river
I smile
At her kohl smudged eye
As my fevered skin breathes blessings
The twittering, chirping little fairies
Touch each other’s wings
Bathing in the little pools
Appearing on the pathways
My heart sprouts
Blue glossy peacock feathers
And dances with thunderclap songs
On this longest day of the year
Let the days shed their light
Let the dark hours be gleeful
Let time’s hand pluck
The weary leaf one by one
And cover the ground
Nothing can take away today’s joy
When the monsoon taps her dancing feet
And the sun stands still
Posted for Susan’s Midweek Motif ~ Entering Summer or Winter @ PoetsUnited
I LOVE this. We take the same topic and treat it magnificently differently. I'm not used to welcoming a monsoon, but I feel the relief as the heat peels off of you and as the the monsoon's leavings invite you to dance!
ReplyDeleteIt has been incredibly hot here. When the thunderstorms finally come, it is a sweet relief. I like the little magic you imbue in this as well in the fairies and such.
ReplyDeleteLet the days shed their light
ReplyDeleteLet the dark hours be gleeful
Let time’s hand pluck
The weary leaf one by one
Such beautiful images.. a delightful read :D
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Even in darkness..light can be found..if we are willing to look..a beautiful poem...
ReplyDeleteweeps a river - that image really works and captures this, as the sun stands still.
ReplyDeleteThis is SO beautiful, Sumana! I was rapt reading the lines "The longest day / Draped in black monsoon sari / Weeps a river
ReplyDeleteI smile / At her kohl smudged eye" This is a poem to lift the heart. I especially love the monsoon tapping her dancing feet.
This is really a fine celebration of Summer Solstice, Sumana. And, let nothing take away today's joy. And yes, let even those dark hours be gleeful in some way.
ReplyDeleteYou take my breath away...the sun stands still!
ReplyDeleteWow, what the vibrant images of monsoon! The energy in your poem, Sumana, so inspiring and contagious! Thank you :)x
ReplyDeleteWhat a joyful celebration of words & season ~ I specially like:
ReplyDeleteMy heart sprouts
Blue glossy peacock feathers
And dances with thunderclap songs
This is so beautiful and the scene so easily pictured in your descriptive words.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely poem Sumana. Your mind created the perfect images to welcome summer. I like so many lines in this and I loved it's soothing style.
ReplyDeleteWow!! Loved it!!
ReplyDeleteWhat a rich, sensual poem ... and I love the touch of magic.
ReplyDeleteGorgeous piece...who can suppress excitement at the first sighting of looming monsoon clouds and then the deluge??...aha!! Enjoyed reading the beautiful poem... a perfect medley that brings alive the rains!!
ReplyDelete"...and the sun stands still." Perfect.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem, I like the personification you did for this one.
ReplyDeleteOh wow...the color, movement and magic in this is so enchanting!
ReplyDeleteSummer Solstice - the longest day of the year, when the earth is most inclined towards the sun - I loved the way that you played with the magic of that. And yes, the personification is wonderful!
ReplyDeleteSuch fluidity, loved it.....Beautifully penned!
ReplyDeleteHow delightful this is, Sumana! The monsoons of course are essential for the revitalisation of nature and the growth of new crops. So when the rains come, I can imagine the unbridled joy fo the populace - well expressed here!
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