any picture comes to my mind,
i try to give it a body of words,
love to sit on other blooms,
for honey, color, fragrance........
This is beautiful.. such clarity in such few words. Loved it :D
time is the most powerful witness
Such profound lines! Beautifully written :)
The seed had so much to undergo but the result was marvelous really no pain no gain.
That waiting.. Only with time the flowers would bloom.
Often love encounters many obstacles so as it grows the couple establish a defence system to defend each other! That is how it should be.
I very much like the point of view you have shown here - Time as witness to our writhing...
I love the wholeness of this poem: how it brings forth "blooms and thorns", not just the pretty bits.
There is much to be learned of time that we can learn from the farmer, one that understands the land and the natural rhythms of it. And that there is a tearing down that leads to growth. A fundamental change.
I love how that seed burst forth in stem, blooms and thorn ~ A joy to read this morning Sumana ~
One thing about seeds -- they can't be stopped from sprouting. I also think about the saying "what you reap, you will sow" for some reason.
Ah lovely--a lot of births come with difficulty==even a poem! Thanks, Sumana. k.
so this is how poetry is written. lines grow from a seed nurtured. :)very true!
No matter how many obstacles are there - if you insist and do your thing, it will blossom into something beautiful (as hoped by majority)
luv the germination process of this poemThanks for dropping in at my Sunday Lime Sumanamuch love...
Love this :-)
Beautiful, beautiful write Sumana!
How I love this - the bursting forth in stems, bloom and thorn.
A simple few lines to convey the waiting! This was incredible...I especially loved how the poem grew from the seed.Donna@LivingFromHappiness
This is artfully done, Summa. A wonderful, complex metaphor is so few lines takes real skill.
Time and a seed. Anything might happen, even a poem. Elizabeth
Such poetic lines ... beautifully written, Sumana :)
Birthing something is not easy, but what beauty when it arrives. Lovely words, poetry
All good things had to go through some difficulties. No plain sailing before getting them!Hank
A lovely write, my partner has been working visually, with the idea of the seed for a while now. A perfect starting place.
may love and beauty spring forth from each heart. A timeless classic Sumana.
A beautifully sketched image and wonderful metaphor!
The satisfaction to see something bloom helps to walk through the bud to bloom process, which can be taxing at times....Awesome write!
Love does indeed grow like that.
Very lovely, Sumana. We all bloom into something over time. If we nurture ourselves well, we can become anything we dream. Loved this :)
I love "Time" as an entity that can witness...brilliant words, Sumana.
Thank you for stopping by and sharing your valuable thoughts.........