Wednesday, 16 September 2015

Let Your Song Be Delicate


courtesy: PU

Let your words flow

From the crystal heart spring

Shimmering in truth’s glow

 

Let your dreams bloom

With the soft fragrance of joy

Dispelling all thorny gloom

 

Let your soul sing

In chrysalis voice

And eternal beauty spring

 


Posted for Rosemary’s Midweek Motif ~ ‘Let your song be delicate’ or not@ Poets United

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29 comments:

  1. X16 September 2015 at 04:35

    Chrysallis voice. I love that. Bursting forth with new life, beautiful as butterflies. And our own budding dreams can lift the gloom in the lives of those around us as well.

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  2. Mary16 September 2015 at 04:40

    Yes, it is a good thing when one has dreams which dispel the gloomy thoughts one can sometimes have during one's waking hours! And, alas, spring is a wonderful synonym for eternal beauty...as it is the most beautiful season of all.

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  3. Rosemary Nissen-Wade16 September 2015 at 05:08

    Delicately lovely!

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  4. Old Egg16 September 2015 at 05:20

    What some beautiful phrase you have included here Sumana. My favorite being "With the soft fragrance of Joy"

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  5. Jae Rose16 September 2015 at 05:31

    Words are indeed a song - long may we sing them...through ebbs and flows...there is great wisdom and delicate joy in this poem

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  6. Anonymous16 September 2015 at 05:50

    I love the idea of the "chrysalis' voice"..

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  7. Magaly Guerrero16 September 2015 at 06:01

    Love the phrase "chrysalis voice"; it promises that softness pays with beauty.

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  8. Susan16 September 2015 at 06:26

    Wow! A breathe of fresh air, to know beginnings and transformations follow!

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  9. Cressida de Nova16 September 2015 at 07:14

    The last stanza is so beautiful !

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  10. Sanaa Rizvi16 September 2015 at 08:17

    LOVE the opening lines to this insightful piece :D

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  11. Purba chakraborty16 September 2015 at 08:22

    Too beautiful. I could picture the eternal beauty spring as I was reading your poem.

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  12. Sherry Blue Sky16 September 2015 at 08:26

    This says it all - to perfection. And so beautifully! Lovely, Sumana.

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  13. Unknown16 September 2015 at 08:59

    I believe that delicate tune resides in an eternal spring. I love the fragrant beauty that wafts off your poem today Sumana.

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  14. Myrna R.16 September 2015 at 15:02

    Your prayer feels complete. As if, you know the answer to all questions about being. May we be what you write here. The world would be paradise.

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  15. annell417 September 2015 at 05:33

    A beautiful piece....flow, glow and all the other perfect word selections.

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  16. Maude Lynn17 September 2015 at 07:20

    "In chrysalis voice"

    I love that.

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  17. claireylove17 September 2015 at 08:24

    What a beautiful blessing ~ thank you!

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  18. Hannah17 September 2015 at 13:38

    What a gentle - delicate gift of poem...beautiful!

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  19. Gen Giggles 17 September 2015 at 14:06

    A definite thing we want for our poetry.

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  20. Scarlet17 September 2015 at 17:15

    I love the words flowing soft and gentle as eternal beauty spring ~

    Grace

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  21. magiceye17 September 2015 at 18:38

    Heartfelt blessing!!

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  22. Anonymous18 September 2015 at 04:46

    "Let your soul sing
    In chrysalis voice".............. gorgeous

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  23. De Jackson18 September 2015 at 09:17

    I love the idea of joy having a fragrance...

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  24. kaykuala18 September 2015 at 09:38

    We would have wanted all things good for our own. It is a prayer in fact! It has a way of happening if we ask hard enough! Truly said Sumana!

    Hank

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  25. ayala19 September 2015 at 05:14

    Beautiful poem !

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  26. X19 September 2015 at 09:24

    How are you sumana?

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  27. Aditi19 September 2015 at 10:09

    Oh, yes. Let your soul sing!
    The last stanza is beautiful! :)

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  28. Alok singhal19 September 2015 at 12:44

    Wow, such a happy post...let me fly!

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  29. Intelliblog22 September 2015 at 23:43

    Delightful and delicate poem that takes us to a better place up on high, Sumana...

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