Wednesday 16 September 2015

Let Your Song Be Delicate


courtesy: PU

Let your words flow

From the crystal heart spring

Shimmering in truth’s glow

 

Let your dreams bloom

With the soft fragrance of joy

Dispelling all thorny gloom

 

Let your soul sing

In chrysalis voice

And eternal beauty spring

 


Posted for Rosemary’s Midweek Motif ~ ‘Let your song be delicate’ or not@ Poets United

29 comments:

  1. Chrysallis voice. I love that. Bursting forth with new life, beautiful as butterflies. And our own budding dreams can lift the gloom in the lives of those around us as well.

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  2. Yes, it is a good thing when one has dreams which dispel the gloomy thoughts one can sometimes have during one's waking hours! And, alas, spring is a wonderful synonym for eternal beauty...as it is the most beautiful season of all.

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  3. What some beautiful phrase you have included here Sumana. My favorite being "With the soft fragrance of Joy"

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  4. Words are indeed a song - long may we sing them...through ebbs and flows...there is great wisdom and delicate joy in this poem

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  5. I love the idea of the "chrysalis' voice"..

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  6. Love the phrase "chrysalis voice"; it promises that softness pays with beauty.

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  7. Wow! A breathe of fresh air, to know beginnings and transformations follow!

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  8. LOVE the opening lines to this insightful piece :D

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  9. Too beautiful. I could picture the eternal beauty spring as I was reading your poem.

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  10. This says it all - to perfection. And so beautifully! Lovely, Sumana.

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  11. I believe that delicate tune resides in an eternal spring. I love the fragrant beauty that wafts off your poem today Sumana.

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  12. Your prayer feels complete. As if, you know the answer to all questions about being. May we be what you write here. The world would be paradise.

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  13. A beautiful piece....flow, glow and all the other perfect word selections.

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  14. "In chrysalis voice"

    I love that.

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  15. What a beautiful blessing ~ thank you!

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  16. What a gentle - delicate gift of poem...beautiful!

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  17. A definite thing we want for our poetry.

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  18. I love the words flowing soft and gentle as eternal beauty spring ~

    Grace

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  19. "Let your soul sing
    In chrysalis voice".............. gorgeous

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  20. I love the idea of joy having a fragrance...

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  21. We would have wanted all things good for our own. It is a prayer in fact! It has a way of happening if we ask hard enough! Truly said Sumana!

    Hank

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  22. Oh, yes. Let your soul sing!
    The last stanza is beautiful! :)

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  23. Wow, such a happy post...let me fly!

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  24. Delightful and delicate poem that takes us to a better place up on high, Sumana...

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