Monday, 4 November 2013

     Dona Nobis Pacem

I see a huge golden egg
The size of the full moon
Oscillating in the inky sky
A crack appears
The shell breaks into golden shower
A luminous Dove emerges
Spreading its radiant wings
It takes a downward flight
Hearing our prayer
Lo and Behold
The Earth metamorphoses
Into a love bubble in the galaxy
Written for Blog4peace @ Real Toads in response to Mimi Lenox's theme 'What do I want my world to look like?' and shared with Poets United.........
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21 comments:

  1. Vandana Sharma4 November 2013 at 01:45

    Oh! wow what a beautiful and lively imagination. Each word transformed into a picture for me.

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  2. Brian Miller4 November 2013 at 05:35

    ha. it might take just such a miracle...but what a wonderful thing it would be....smiles

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  3. TALON4 November 2013 at 06:34

    Oh, wouldn't that be beautiful to behold? Would be amazing!

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    1. Sumana Roy4 November 2013 at 07:00

      to tell you the truth once i had such a dream and it was a swan that came out of that primordial egg and gradually disappeared into the constellation....in the poem i made a little change.......thanks for your nice comment...

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  4. Kerry O'Connor4 November 2013 at 06:36

    This is a beautifully imaginative homage to peace.

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  5. Sumana Roy4 November 2013 at 06:54

    Thanks Laura..

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  6. Unknown4 November 2013 at 06:59

    Your descriptions are enchanting. I can visualize it perfectly and it is beautiful ♥

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    1. Sumana Roy4 November 2013 at 07:04

      Thanks Kathy for the visit and your nice comment... :)

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  7. Grace4 November 2013 at 09:29

    A love bubble ~ I would like that too ~

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  8. Sherry Blue Sky4 November 2013 at 12:55

    I LOVE this! I need the world to be a love bubble.

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  9. Other Mary4 November 2013 at 13:01

    That would be a lovely metamorphosis.

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  10. Susie Clevenger4 November 2013 at 14:11

    Yes, let us be gathered under a love bubble...Beautiful

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  11. Gemma Wiseman4 November 2013 at 14:50

    Like the birth of a beautiful legend. Lovely.

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  12. Margaret4 November 2013 at 17:20

    from the moon "The shell breaks into golden shower
    A luminous Dove emerges" … That is so AWESOME!

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  13. Anonymous4 November 2013 at 23:21

    Oh! That is so sweet and beautiful. :-)
    -HA

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  14. Gabriella4 November 2013 at 23:42

    I like the images in your poem Sumana, especially the moon-like golden egg and the love bubble.

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  15. Anonymous11 November 2013 at 20:30

    Ha! People typically equate peace with calm imagery. This was a great reversal of that.

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