Monday, 4 November 2013

     Dona Nobis Pacem

I see a huge golden egg
The size of the full moon
Oscillating in the inky sky
A crack appears
The shell breaks into golden shower
A luminous Dove emerges
Spreading its radiant wings
It takes a downward flight
Hearing our prayer
Lo and Behold
The Earth metamorphoses
Into a love bubble in the galaxy
Written for Blog4peace @ Real Toads in response to Mimi Lenox's theme 'What do I want my world to look like?' and shared with Poets United.........

22 comments:

  1. Oh! wow what a beautiful and lively imagination. Each word transformed into a picture for me.

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  2. ha. it might take just such a miracle...but what a wonderful thing it would be....smiles

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    1. yeah..miracles happen sometimes.. :)

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  3. May it be so… om shanti, shalom, salaam, peace, peace, peace.
    Please consider yourself officially invited to participate this year's 5th Annual Gratitude (word) Quilt. Instructions (it is very simple) and a link that explains the origin of the word quilt can be found at the top of my blog. In past years there have been participants from every continent except Antarctica. I hope you'll join us:-)

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  4. Oh, wouldn't that be beautiful to behold? Would be amazing!

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    1. to tell you the truth once i had such a dream and it was a swan that came out of that primordial egg and gradually disappeared into the constellation....in the poem i made a little change.......thanks for your nice comment...

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  5. This is a beautifully imaginative homage to peace.

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  6. Your descriptions are enchanting. I can visualize it perfectly and it is beautiful ♥

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    1. Thanks Kathy for the visit and your nice comment... :)

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  7. A love bubble ~ I would like that too ~

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  8. I LOVE this! I need the world to be a love bubble.

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  9. That would be a lovely metamorphosis.

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  10. Yes, let us be gathered under a love bubble...Beautiful

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  11. Like the birth of a beautiful legend. Lovely.

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  12. from the moon "The shell breaks into golden shower
    A luminous Dove emerges" … That is so AWESOME!

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  13. Oh! That is so sweet and beautiful. :-)
    -HA

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  14. I like the images in your poem Sumana, especially the moon-like golden egg and the love bubble.

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  15. Ha! People typically equate peace with calm imagery. This was a great reversal of that.

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