any picture comes to my mind,
i try to give it a body of words,
love to sit on other blooms,
for honey, color, fragrance........
Ah!! such a beautiful description of nature's beauty and when our heart is filled with it, we need nothing more!!
It is beautiful and can be read in so many ways. What struck me the most is the final line that I read as if the 'I' in the poem is missing her/his heart and needs to find it again. Beautiful!
Beautiful, the eye of "I" become pond, sun, one.
lovely reflection shot....and a really nice feel to this...it feels like so much...
Lovely picture and words, but some punctuation would be a great addition...
Gorgeous picture. Nature within a beautiful statement
That is so sweet and a lovely imagery poem!
Oh my this is so beautiful! I'm so glad I stopped by, Sumana. <3
"The stomach is full, the ocean no fuller, both have the same quality of fullness. In that, then, one is equal to the other." -- William Carlos Williams
a dewdrop holds the sun! I adore that. The whole poem is stunning.
Poem is so much like a painting...Pretty!
Lovely. I know ponds like that. Should try to make my mind more like them! K.
Beautiful images and thoughtful words. I found the lack of punctuation added to the poem, rather than detracted from it.
I love the pond holding "the sky in her bosom" as the reflection... Sumana, this is a deceptively simple poem. Your final statement says you are at peace with the pure beauty of this moment. Loved it! Amy
lovely image ~
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