Saturday 5 April 2014


   APRIL-5


Non-existent and brittle Kingdom
        Illusion is Queen
Left is right and right left
        Political confusion
        Entry denied
Mirror
        Denied entry
        Confusion political
Left right and right is left
       Queen is illusion
Kingdom brittle and non-existent

posred for Grace's prompt @ Real Toads

14 comments:

  1. I like the mirror poem like a palindrome ~ Illusion is Queen/Queen is Illusion, very non-existent life ~

    Thanks for participating in Real Toads ~ Happy weekend Sumana ~

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  2. politics is all smoke and mirrors
    and they change positions whenever they need
    to gain money and power

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  3. your structure is intriguing; have a nice weekend

    much love...

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  4. Wonder how that come about that politics seems to watch reality through smoke and mirrors... (could you send me an email on brudberg (at) gmail,com I have a question for you.

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  5. Politics is never clear....it is full of pretense. Great capture of its troubling reflection

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  6. Very interesting use of mirroring sentences here. :)

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  7. I love the combination of mirrors and politics-nothing is as it seems!

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  8. Politics and politicians are never quite what they seem..it's all a delusion.

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  9. Brilliant mirror-image poem!

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  10. Is this a pallindrome? Wow! You've risen up very well to the challenge of writing one.

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  11. Either way one looks at it… it's a mess. :)

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  12. i love this one. i have to try writing a pallindrome

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