Wednesday 4 June 2014

THE MOON
courtesy : google image

When I see you

Only sense of vision

Remains

Words vaporize

A mystic emptiness

Resides

That soft, silver flow

Cooling me down

Spreads

Darkness melts away

The sterling night

Meditates

 

Posted for Alan’s prompt The Moon @ Poetry Jam

17 comments:

  1. Yes, the moon certainly has a calming affect on us. Thank you for this.

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  2. Very nice. This poem leaves me with a sense of stillness and peacefulness, Sumana.

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  3. nice....yes, our eternal night light...giving us direction...and comfort from the heavens...nice take....

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  4. There is a real peace and serenity in your words, great poem.

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  5. The moon has a calming effect on the mind and this is the reason many beautiful lines bloom at night

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  6. Lovely description of the peace and calm found in looking at the moon sometimes. Thanks for posting.

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  7. I like how the moon, darkness and the readers all seem to merge in your serene words, Sumana!

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  8. After warm summer days, I love " That soft, silver flow
    Cooling me down" physically and mentally.

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  9. A lovely, serene, transcendent piece, Sumana. Beautiful!

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  10. I love "the sterling night meditates"....so serene.

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  11. :) the moon makes us speechless with its timeless beauty.

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  12. Goes perfectly with the Pic .. lovely

    Bikram

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  13. Love a good moon lite night that mystic atmosphere, nice one

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  14. I like that 'words vaporize' - what an image ~

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  15. Loved it Suman..i liked the closing lines..

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